Sketching for my opening sequence!

Welcome back for my opening sequence sketching, my storyboard.

The first scenes begin with a pan movement shot out of the front of the car peering out to the park they will be at. Then a tilt movement will occur of the daughter sitting in the backseat. Then a side view of the car will take place of the daughter in the backseat. It will then be shown being closed by the mother because she took her daughter out. A wide shot of the daughter and her mother will then take place, it will consist of the daughter in a stroller while the mother pushes her toward the park. An establishing shot will then be taken of the park. 

Next will be the mother taking her daughter out of the stroller and putting her down onto the floor. An over the shoulder shot will then occur over the mothers shoulder while she pushes her daughter on the swing. Another wide shot will occur of the daughter going down the slide and the mother waiting at the bottom. They will then be shown walking down the dock of a pond near by. They will then be shown walking and running around the park together. The mother will hold the daughter in the air and spin in circles. 

Then the mother's phone will ring and she will walk back to the bench where her phone was placed. The daughter will still be seen in this shot but there will also be a man seen in this shot lurking around the corner. The mother will pick up her phone and begin to talk but on the other side the man will be seen taking the daughter. Then the mother will turn around and notice that the man has taken her daughter. The mother will then chase after the man who has taken her daughter. A close up shot will then occur of the man and daughter, the daughter will be crying. 

Then the man will be seen getting closer to his car. The mother can then see heard screaming for her daughter but not seen in the shot. The man will be seen in his car and the mother behind screaming still. He will then back out of the spot while the mother runs to her own car. Then she will be seen in the car.  A close up shot of her phone will then be seen while she types 911. 

A long shot of her car will then be shown while her voice is still heard screaming to the police that someone has taken her child. A split screen will then happen of the operator and the mother. They will then converse of what is happening. Then the title "GONE GIRL" will appear with the voice of the mother still audible describing the man to the police. Then music will then get louder and cover over her voice. Lastly the "DIRECTED BY JASMINE MENDEZ" will be seen.